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 Arwen276 |
Re: Chapter nineteen | ||
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Posts: 878 (10/01/04 09:20:39) |
Wow Indeed! Sabina, that was amazing, and very much worth the wait. It was beautifully written... and my only wish was to be possessing one of these characters for that moment of heaven! Can't wait for more! ~Arwen Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow
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thesongwriter |
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Posts: 37 (10/01/04 10:48:05) 2. Floating Rose |
hey there!
I'm sorry but I have to steal a lame quote to compensate the lack of any brain function: I'M LOVING IT!!!! sure we had to wait a verrry long time for that update but reading this chapter, it was SO worth it!! keep it coming! bb sam |
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TKOLove |
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Posts: 88 (10/01/04 16:43:53) |
Sabina,
I know I've already told you how much I enjoyed this chapter, but it's been a while since I've had the chance to post about your fic. So let me say this: merely having chapter 19 on my computer made my office overheat.  Also, I thoroughly agree with others that you did a super job writing the girls in such a way as to combine desperate passion with tender devotion. I'm with all the other hungry kittens; bring on chapter 20! ...when we find That Kind of Love...
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sam7777 |
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Posts: 3282 (10/01/04 17:18:40) 20. Not one Much for the Timber |
Wow!!!
 That was amazing and more than worth waiting for. One of the best first times that I've seen. Truly we are not worthy. 
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xenamungrrr |
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Posts: 5 (10/02/04 10:39:26) |
 Wow. Just wow. Awesome job with this fic. I absolutely can't get enough of it. I love your character developement and geez, do you know how to write a love scene. You go girl. |
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ShyTemptress |
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Posts: 108 (10/02/04 12:05:49) 3. Flaming O |
 Howdy, welcome back.  You've been missed as you can probably tell. I was all ready to go back a reread to make sure I haven't forgotten anything. Okay, now to my reply :ahem: Can I just say wow and yay! That was great a very long awaited. The scene was greatly written you and your beta are quite the team. But whats with the skeletons? Okay, I mean no skeletons are good, but I mean what happened? heres my theory. The whole temple was made to test the love and devotion of the two 'challengers'. All the challenges they had to face apart and together, help to point out if they have enough love to work together and win back the powers of the goddess. And from the beginning its obvious the girl want each other... But in the previous room whenever they get all arousey they skeletons come to stop them, but now there weren't any. Or maybe they were to um.... occupied to tell that there were any, but then again the trap they set should've told them if there were any... So could this room be the room they wer meant to show their passions in? Cause with all the other rooms they weren't completely alone and they could have always been together had they chose, or maybe I'm wrong. -shrug- But this room seemed specifically chosen to taken them apart so they couldn't be together and test them. It was completely sweet how Willow was swimming to get back to her love. Maybe this temple was made for to soul mate who had never met and slowly had to build a relationship. All the skeletons were there to make sure it was the right time and that they didn't regret it? Or maybe that sounds silly... Okay next! Thats it? Not that I didn'y enjoy it cause wow I did, but thats IT?!?! Okay I mean every time something huge had happened there has been something big in the temple to happen :Flashback: When they first met... Quote: When they first kissed... Quote: And when they 'do the deed' I'm still waiting for a door to open or some scantily clad woman to come and tell them they've won a car or something. Well gotta bounce... -Shy Southern Temptress 
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VixenyTarasHot |
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Posts: 46 (10/04/04 15:23:56) |
Oh my god.. dude.. that was just really freaking incredible. So sweet and gentle and just... wow is absolutely right. I loved the update!! I'm kinda speechless right now.. cuz seriously that was I think the most amazing love scene I've ever read..
Kudos to you dude, and I really really don't know if I can wait that long to read the next part!! *sigh* I know it'll be worth the wait though, so I guess take as much time as you need.... but not too much..? maybe? Till next time, You are kickass! Ashleigh "...A-and I'm gonna make it up to you. Starting right now."
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WickedReds |
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Posts: 61 (10/04/04 17:35:17) |
Sabina,
WOW... that was figgin beautiful... i love this fic ( i started reading at The Looking Glass)... and i'm bad cause i never wrote any feedback...  ... me punished now... but i must say Wooo Hoo to ur love scene...and i want more -reds  my banana dances for smut  Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. Of course.-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon
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Red Jassy |
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Posts: 201 (10/04/04 17:54:32) |
hey sabina,
absolutely beautiful.. worth the wait.. I love the part where Tara hanging on for control then loves willow with the oh so... feverish moments.. the kiss, holding and touching.. great thanks for the update  ciao, j0an Don't you understand? That everything I do, I do for you? Anything that might be special in me...is you.
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Tempest Duer |
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Posts: 2290 (10/05/04 22:07:12) 15. Apple Sauce&Tuna |
I'm glad that I can touch-type, because I don't think I can see anything right now. My eyeballs aren't actully stuck to the screen, but they might as well be... and yeah... I enjoyed it... a lot...
Much wowness. It's insulting to the whole gender[sic] of rap.
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sabina |
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Posts: 406 (10/14/04 17:30:46) |
Hi
Wow. Im still in awe of the feedback for this last chapter.  I was kind of worried about finally posting a NC-17 scene. I had been building up the sexual tension between W/T for almost a year and I really wanted to write their first time in a way that made the long wait (both W/Ts and everyones reading this story) worthwhile. It made my day (or maybe I should say days, lol) to read the amazing replies the kittens left for chapter nineteen Has it been a year already since I started posting this story? Gosh It doesnt seem that long  By this time last year I was biting my nails waiting to see what kind of feedback I got and if I should just dedicate myself to gardening on my free time instead of writing  It was a good thing you kittens actually liked my story since I absolutely suck at gardening  I just wanted to thank all of you who have been reading my story specially those of you who have followed the artifact since the beginning, and of course my beta reader, TKOLove, who probably didnt know what she was getting into when she agreed to beta this story for me ( ) and who has been making such an incredible job with my story.  Ok, so now that I wrote my little anniversary speech and youre all still awake (hopefully  ) Ill write the individual replies:wimpy0729 Thank you so much Quote: Wow You just made me blush Im sorry you were useless for the rest of the day but Im really glad that you liked the update and thought that it was worth the wait. Dont worry you wont have to wait that long again WickedReds Thank you Im glad W/Ts first time was worth the wait More is on the way I really, really love those drool and thud emoticons and so many just for me *eyes glazed over* Oh, by the way I like your banana dances for smut BFR from Paris I agree it was a mean cliffhanger eh eh  Well, they are practiced tomb raiders so they should know how to set a trap properly but they sure deserve extra points for doing it while they were so completely distracted by each other. Im pretty sure if it was me I would have stuck at least one of the anchors in my toe instead of the wall Thank you Im happy you liked the love making scene Are you sure you dont remember what W/T are looking for? Ah I guess I should take the hint and really start writing faster  They are looking for the next piece of Goddess Shamias star. The legend says that if you can reconstitute the star youll have the Goddess powers. And the pieces of the star are scattered in the temple where W/T are trapped together. YMKA It is good to be back Thank you This chapter rendered you speechless? I think that deserves a happy banana dance Oh I cant resist that flirt emoticon all right Well, next chapter it will be Willows turn to make love to Tara Willster Thank you very much for your kind words Im glad you thought this last update was well worth the long wait. I was worried about writing their first time. It feels really good to know that you liked it Artemis Eh Im sorry about the lateness of your birthday present but Im glad you liked it It is awesome to received compliments from you on W/T first time since I know you can write incredible NC-17 scenes I still remember Hellebore Im happy you liked the opening sequence. Since the focus of this chapter is mainly on W/T making love the setting of the trap falls a little in the shadow. About the skeletons Well my lips are sealed for now. But I promise to answer your questions soon TheRose24 Thank you Im glad you liked both W/Ts first time and the trap irishlassie101 Hi Thank you I love those emoticons. It was fun to write about W/T setting the trap while trying not to get completely distracted by the thought that they were about to make love for the first time. Im happy that you liked their first time Im sure there will be more rooms for W/T to explore and maybe theyll need the net badkitty Thank you Yes, theyll get back to their tomb raiding adventures, in fact I have a new room just ready for them to walk into it, but not before Willow gets her turn to make love to Tara Arwen276 Thank you Im glad you thought it was beautiful and worth the wait. Im hoping not to make you wait long for the next chapter.thesongwriter Hi Thank you Its great to know that you think this chapter was worth the wait TKOLove Even though I already knew your opinion about this chapter it is always so great to see your name on this thread Eh I should have written W/Ts first time in the winter having your office overheating in the summer must have been tough Kidding apart, thank you for all of your help with this chapter. Your feedback played a huge role in shaping this chapter and you had an amazing patience with all of my re-writes of chapter nineteen. Im sure I couldnt have found a better beta sam7777 Quote: Wow Thank you very much You just put this big goofy smile on my face Oh, by the way I absolutely love those emoticons xenamungrrr Thank you so much. You just made my day ShyTemptress Thank you Its good to be back and its great to know that Ive been missed and that you were about to go and re-read my story. Re-read my story wow Im happy to know that you liked W/Ts first time. I know I took a long time to post it and its great to know that people think it was worth the wait About the skeletons Well as I said to Artemis, my lips are sealed for now but I promise that issue will be addressed soon in one of the upcoming chapters Quote: I just had this image of a scantily clad woman popping up from the floor and telling W/T in an excessively cheery voice:Youve just won a car. Kidding aside I can see your point. I did think of linking some major event in the temple to their love making but then I gave up the idea. I wanted them to make love because they wanted to and not because they had to in order to move forward in the temple. I felt W/T deserved to have that moment for them and be as free from pressure as possible. VixenyTarasHot Thank you Quote: Wow Ah I think you just made my day or rather my night since its kind of late. Red Jassy Hi Thank you Im happy you liked this chapter.Thank you for the feedback Tempest Duer Ah thank you Im glad you enjoyed it a lot "I know I was born and I know that I'll die. The in between is mine. I am mine!" - Pearl Jam |
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ShyTemptress |
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Posts: 108 (10/14/04 19:10:00) 3. Flaming O |
I didn't mean they HAD to but you know just poof.... scantily clad woman with the car... but yeah still waiting.
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TKOLove |
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Posts: 88 (11/01/04 20:35:00) |
Quote: and... Quote: Hi Sabina. Thank you so much for all of those kind words. We're a year into this story...wow. I know a little bit about the busy schedule you keep and I'm always amazed that you can come up with such detailed chapters with so much else on your plate. A lot has gone into this fic and I've enjoyed working on it with you. We've gone back and forth with revisions on a couple of chapters and it's been well worth the effort every time. I just have to tell you again that I'm still buzzing over the hotness that is Willow and Tara's NC-17 naked time.  It's possible that chapters 19 and 20 need their own fire crew. I'm gearing up for what comes next. Lead the way... TKOL ...when we find That Kind of Love...
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bluewillowwitch |
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Posts: 1286 (11/13/04 14:19:49) |
 sabina  ,*Opens mouth in shock at a loss for words!* OMG!  I love this fic! :Clap and  Finally did it!!!!  That was... I'm at a lost for words! Can't wait to  more. Update soon, please?  Grace    ------------------------------------------ "Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos |
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Irene73 |
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Posts: 20 (11/30/04 22:35:48) |
Hey!!!
First post for your fic and may I say...WOW!!! How did you know I like Willow and Tara fanfic? He he he Anyways awesome writing and what an awesome concept for a fic. Now where can I go and buy this movie? It's not a movie you say...well...IT SHOULD BE!!! I can vividly see every scene in my head and believe me that's saying alot. Not my brain capacity...he he he. But serioulsy, you are an amazing writer...the kitten board never disappoints when it comes to inspiring terrific writers and you are no exception. BRAVO  So now I will wait for updatey goodnes keeping my fingers crossed in hopes that it wont be to long of a wait. One question...Will Willow ever reveal to Tara about her childhood? Especially what happened to her on that awful day her parents abandonded her in that pyramid? I hope so...I feel that by revealing that part of herself to Tara...she will be able to finally release any inner doubt, fear, and demons she might still by holding on to. Again thank you for sharing your story and imagination with us. Saluting you while holding up my second cup of grape juice, Irene |
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Traveler4069 |
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Posts: 16 (12/05/04 13:17:18) |
Great adventure story and one hell of a love story. Sexy and loving.
I'm new to the site-hence the first post but I've read your story from start to finish and will wait eagerly for up dates. Thanks for telling a story so well.
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trashxmyxheart |
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Posts: 2 (12/08/04 17:35:08) |
Wow. I mean-WoW!. That was some sex! Lol. Great update. More please manda
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Traveler4069 |
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Posts: 16 (12/14/04 13:46:08) |
At the risk of getting my mouse controlling hand slapped I have spent today begging wonderful authors like yourself to update their stories. I realize that a good story can be a lot of work and the real world sometimes intrudes but take pity on your fans. Let us know that your at least thinking about an update. Until then I will reread the Artifact again and try to find a smilie for begging.
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UnicornLover |
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Posts: 42 (12/15/04 17:04:50) 2. Floating Rose |
Sabina,
Wow!!!!!!!!! i mean wow!!!!! you are an awesome writer! please continue!  ray i've been fallowing your story since you first posted it and i've been i love with your story ever since! i love tomb raider, but think it would be better this way! by far! and make the most worthy tomb raiders EVER!what did to was just  please continue to write with more of that, please? great job!  ~*Shawna*~
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sabina |
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Posts: 406 (03/20/05 16:51:55) |
Hi there
Yeah, I know it has been months since Ive shown my face erm I mean posted on this thread It definitely has been too long  It has been a tough year in college for me I swear most of my professors seem to be monsters and demons in disguise at least judging from the amount of work they drop on us, they sure love to watch us suffer I have just finished this Saturday the last of my first semesters exams and finally Im going to have a couple of weeks of vacation Anyway, in between papers and exams and, well, more exams I lost my way with my story for awhile but now I think Im back on the right track to continue the artifact. So, Im hoping on posting a new chapter when I come back from my vacation and then Ill try and update the story a lot more frequently. Thanks so much to all of you who have been following the artifact and are still waiting for the story to continue ShyTempress Hum ah sorry to disappoint you but no scantily clad woman is going to pop from the walls At least not right away. But that is a good idea This time Willow and Taras lovemaking isnt in any way linked to the trap they are facing. Maybe it will be sometime later Maybe for the temple it wasnt the right time for them to make love Youre right. It isnt nice to keep secrets. But I wont be keeping secrets much longer Thank you for following the story TKOLove Hi there I really meant everything that I said. You are a great beta reader and Im lucky you decided to help me with my story . Ive said it before but since its true I think I can say it again  your help and work made the artifact a much better story than it would have been otherwise, so thank you Ah Im just sorry it is taking me so long to finish writing it P.S. I do hope chapter 20 will need its own fire crew bluewillowwitch Hi Thank you (I so love that holy sheep emoticon )Im really glad you think the long wait for Willow and Tara to finally make love was worth it. Erm I know it has been a really long time since I last updated but Im hoping to update soon now Irene73 Hi Wow ah uh (cleans throat) *cof cof* Thank you so much for your kind words . I usually spend countless amounts of time wondering if Im writing too much or too little details. It makes me happy to know that you can see my story as if it was a movie playing right before your eyes. That means that Im doing something right Yeah, Willow will tell Tara what happened to her on that day her parents abandoned her in that pyramid sometime soon. It will be a difficult step for her. They both still have a few inner ghosts haunting them that theyll have to face before they leave the temple. Thank you for reading Traveler4069 Thank you Im honoured that your first reply was to my story Im really sorry for taking so long to update or even just to post here on this thread. My life has been hectic these last few months and I didnt want to post here knowing that there wasnt an update in sight. I know its really annoying when the stories that you are following arent updated for ages Hopefully Ill update soon. Thanks for asking about my story trashxmyxheart Thank you Hopefully more is on the way. UnicornLover Thank you Two wows?! WOW Even though I love tomb raider the way it is I agree with you, I think it would be a lot better this way Ah yes, next chapter will bring more of Willow and Tara loving "I know I was born and I know that I'll die. The in between is mine. I am mine!" - Pearl Jam |
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